Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20190618150838/@comment-33029135-20190702163600

Ginnyharry4ever wrote: For the last time, I probably won’t delete the comment.

And your comments definitely aren’t constructive criticism

This is constructive criticism

Praise:

This story was more descriptive than most, good work!

All the affection in the story was sweet.

I really liked Nita's reaction to meeting Marigold.

The bonding between Fuli and Belee was cute!

Criticism:

Kora was being kind of useless while his relatives insulted his exhausted mate. how should you criticize that I do not like the motif of Marigold?