Thread:Gracekim12/@comment-3562042-20170702152553/@comment-31583911-20170703220038

could you maybe leave a little comment on what you like about the story and what I can improve on please?:D (I like getting tips, It helps me to improve my writing and since I'm doing my best to create new characters in an exisiting world, I need all the tips I can get..... :')  Plus I will upload what i've got so far of the sequel soon. I'm currently working on the outline on the plot you see)