Talk:The Lion Guard: Friends Reunited/@comment-27625725-20160905165933

Nice job!

Praise:


 * Lions do hold their tails high in greeting, so the way Kion greeted Jasiri was realistic.


 * The bonding between Kion and Vitani was very sweet.


 * I kind of life the idea that Nita might be slightly jealous of Kion's adoration for Mari, though she doesn't want to show it.


 * I thought it was nice that Vitani actually seemed close to losing her temper. I don't really like it when she just placidly listens to Kata or Maya.


 * The ending was very cute! I was glad to see Mari with both Kion and Simba.

Criticism:


 * So . . . Jasiri, who is a teenager/cub just like Janja . . . is Janja's daughter?


 * From what I've gathered, Jasiri lives in the clan with a bunch of unscrupulous, dishonorable hyenas. Why? She's kind, friendly, and smart. This story also suggests that she's going to be a scout, under Janja. This doesn't make any sense in my opinion. For one, she's a female. Bigger and stronger than males. For another, why would she tolerate Janja being her boss? He's cruel, but rather foolish and quits easily. She's an excellent fighter and seemingly intelligent. Also, she's expressed the opinion that she does not have any respect for Janja and his clan, and for good reason. Why does she remain with them?