Thread:The-Rootbeer-Queen/@comment-27941262-20170507164607/@comment-25890492-20170507193905

I think they are interesting characters with a lot of promise, but I would spend some time giving them a personality. Let us know how Kudiyan, Omaiga, and Oponeo act and behave in certain situations. Let us know a bit about them. I think the 'super roar' may be a bit too much, since the roar is already powerful in and of itself. I would also try and find roles for them in the guard, as they each have their own title. Maybe Kudiyan is the strongest of heart, Omaiga is the quickest of though (good for planning and strategies, and Openeo is the brightest of lights (as in, the most driven, optimistic, that kind of thing) or something like that. I'd also maybe not have them be Simba and Nala's kids, that adds complications and wouldn't make a whole lot of sense in the grand scheme of things. Instead, maybe have them be close friends of the royal family so that way they can still have a strong bond without the controversy. Otherwise, great job! I like these characters a lot