Talk:The Lion Guard: A Sibling For Nita/@comment-27625725-20161009185132

Good story!

Praise:


 * This story was more descriptive than most, good work!


 * All the affection in the story was sweet.


 * I really liked Nita's reaction to meeting Marigold.


 * The bonding between Fuli and Belee was cute!

Criticism:


 * I found it a little bit odd that Kora's first impulse is to go fetch everyone, rather than asking her if she needed anything.


 * Kora was also being kind of useless while his relatives insulted his exhausted mate.