Talk:The Lion Guard: Marigold's Wish/@comment-27625725-20160821185439

Another nice story!

Praise:


 * I like how Beshte got emotional; in the episodes, he's easily touched, so that was in character!


 * It's nice to see how characters are developing, which is why I like how Mari asked to go with Rafiki and Nita. It shows that she's eager to be with Nita and/or likes to move.


 * The part where Simba played with Mari was very sweet and well done.

Criticism:


 * Really minor, but Ono doesn't seem like he would like to play Baobab Ball to me. Last time Kion and Bunga came near with a baobab, he cried out ordered his flock to take to the air.


 * I discourage reusing quotes frequently(such as the exchange between Zazu and Simba about the morning report). It's better if you write your own dialogue.