Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20190302201957/@comment-33029135-20190415191258

=The Lion Guard: Confrontation with Makucha=

It was a beautiful day in the Pridelands.

The Lion Guard was doing a patrol in Ukuni Woods.

"How's Basi?" Fuli asked.

"He's fine." Beshte answered.

Kion glanced at Ono.

Ono nodded, and took to the sky.

He returned a moment later, and settled down on Beshte's back.

“Makucha’s Leap is attacking Bhati.” Ono said.

“Where are they?” Fuli asked.

“They’re at the Water Hole.” Ono said.

“Let’s go, Lion Guard.” Kion said.

He led the way to the Water Hole.

When they arrived, Kion bounded forward.

“Get out of the Pridelands!” He called.

Makucha glanced up.

“Why should we?” He asked.

Kion glanced at Fuli.

Fuli nodded, and moved forward.

She led Bhati towards Beshte.

Kion unsheathed his claws, and sank them into the earth underneath him.

He braced himself, and performed the Roar.

It sent Makucha’s Leap toppling backwards.

Kion watched them stumble towards the border.

He glanced at Bhati.

“Are you okay?” He asked.

Bhati nodded.

“Thanks, Lion Guard.” She said.

“You’re welcome.” Bunga said.

Beshte cleared his throat.

“If you’d like, I’ll take you home.” He said.

“Okay” Bhati said.

Beshte knelt down, and Fuli helped Bhati climb onto his back.

Meanwhile, Kenai and Kia had met up with Bemba at the Meadow.

They were settled down underneath the baobab tree.

"How was the hunt?" Kenai asked.

"It was fine." Bemba answered. =The Lion Guard: Defeating Mapigano=

It was a peaceful day in the Pridelands.

The Lion Guard was patrolling Chakula Plains.

"How's Basi?" Kion asked.

"He's fine." Beshte answered.

Kion glanced at Ono.

Ono nodded, and took to the sky.

He returned a moment later, and settled down on Beshte's back.

“Mapigano is attacking Bracken.” Ono said.

Kion and Fuli exchanged a glance.

“Where are they?” Fuli asked.

“They’re at the Water Hole.” Ono answered.

“Let’s go, Lion Guard.” Kion said.

He led the way to the Water Hole.

When they arrived, Kion bounded forward.

“Get out of the Pridelands!” He called.

Mapigano chuckled.

“Why should I?” He asked.

Kion glanced at Fuli.

Fuli nodded, and moved forward.

She led Bracken towards Beshte.

Kion unsheathed his claws, and sank them into the earth underneath him.

He braced himself, and performed the Roar.

It sent Mapigano toppling backwards.

Kion watched him stumble towards the border.

He glanced at Bracken.

“Are you okay?” He asked.

Bracken nodded.

“Thanks, Lion Guard.” He said.

“You’re welcome.” Fuli said.

Beshte cleared his throat.

“If you’d like, I’ll take you home.” He said.

“Okay” Bracken said.

Beshte knelt down, and Fuli helped Bracken climb onto his back.

Meanwhile, Nita had met up with Rafiki at his tree.

She was helping him count juniper berries.

“How’s Mosi?” Nita asked.

“He is fine.” Rafiki said.

there are some differences between these two stories but the scheme is almost the same and it is unfortunately in the case of many of your stories just a story many episodes are too similar to myself I would advise you to use more diversity best to surprise readers because so far one more disadvantage is that there is no action here. It's just that nothing happens. There are no plot lines and the episodes are not connected by any special storyline so they do not form a coherent story