Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20190302201957/@comment-33029135-20190415195435

Another disadvantage is that almost no children appear in the series Kovu and Kiara, so these two have no opportunity to present themselves to the reader as parents and I think that their children would use some good personality, well-written, well-written and original (see for example for the personality of my Mohatu)

another good step would be to add new characters from time to time and it would be best to show them through the characters and their integration with other characters and the surrounding that they live in one big universe

but I say it seriously: in contrast to my universe, your universe is lacking a bigger antagonist that could be a greater threat for Pridelands residents, which would very well propel the plot and characters by doing the same thing, do not show their personality, it's worth expanding the roles of some characters as well as the characters themselves, Kenai Nita Kia and Mari are perfectly suited for this characters with a lot of potential that is in my opinion untapped