Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20191017121132/@comment-33029135-20191025132531

Ginnyharry4ever wrote: Kanapkuba wrote: I really liked the way you outlined the relationship of kion and fuli and for this reason I wonder how I should make it just to outline that such a romantic character in the relationship between Kion and Jasiri

you are more experienced than me so I wanted to ask you for advice How to make it clearly visible such real live love between Mohatu's parents I don’t know I would like you to advise me How can I show my readers that my character's parents are a loving marriage