Talk:The Lion Guard: Familial Affection/@comment-27625725-20160813011629

Very good job! I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Praise:


 * All of the family bonding in the story was very sweet!


 * I enjoyed the exchanges between Nala and Vitani. Since Nala took a backseat during Simba's Pride, we never saw these characters develop a relationship.


 * All in all, the story was put together well. There was love and happiness, but it was tinged with grief and sadness.

Criticism:


 * Asking your dad about his own father's death seems a little blunt, especially since Kion is usually very considerate of other's feelings. However, I understand that it was needed for the plot of the story.