User blog:Ladybernard/I'm New

I'm new to lion king fanon, and I'd like some help with a few things, if someone could please give me some tips. I'm not sure how links work, it'd be great if someone could tell me how to use them.

Also, if anyone has looked at my characters (Kizazi, Upelelezi, Waanzin, Speckles and Kumbuka), I'd like to know if you think I should publish my story. To some it up, prince Kizazi meets Waanzin, the daughter of Ed the hyena, and they become friends. They find out that they can't be because lions and hyena's don't get along, so they Kizazi convinces Kovu to try to befriend the hyena clan. When he does, Simba stumbles upon him talking to them, and thinks that Kovu is being attacked. He roars at the hyenas, who scatter. When Kovu explains that he was only talking to them, Simba tells him that he can't talk to those slobbering, stupid poachers. Kovu tells him that he is king now, and he decides things now. I don't want to say too much more. I really hope it's worth bothering with. Tell me what you think, please oh please!

Thanks in advance! :)