Thread:Gracekim12/@comment-3562042-20170818201636/@comment-31583911-20170825221507

It's was interesting. It'll have to be tommorow, i'm afriad, sorry.

I just want to say if I was in charge of the lion guard, I would try to explore the history of the royal family and pridelands in general, Get the lion guard to LEAVE the pridelands to at least see  other areas outside its borders so there's world building, Age the characters up over time, Show Kovu and Kiara meet again then have one of them meet Jasiri, Explain who the past guards were and where the lion guard tradition came from, Explain WHEN Kion was born so like how long after Kiara and Kovu's first meeting was it by the time he was born, Explain or at least hint at Kovu's trainning, Have Makini go on a trip when she's a bit older, explain where Kion and his friends go off to before Kiara reachs adulthood, Explain how Janja's clan got to the outlands and how his parents are, give Zuri and Tiifu a reason to actually be Kiara's friends, develop them and explain where on earth they came from, hint or allude to Kovu's real father, give Scar's guard members names and backstory, Explain who the good and bad lions of the past before Muafsa and Scar were, Show Sarabi and Nala's mother even if they happen to be dead by then, Explain or show the lionesses for once, show the outsiders more than once, give Scar and Ushari a better motive and  probbaly put it on Disney XD..... Yeah, Just had to get that off my chest XD

Anyway! I'm making progress! I have sucessfully recreated 'Rise of Scar' in my own way (I even explained Zahra's situation). Let's just say there's actual fire this time since I researched that in Dry season there are usually wild forest fires.

So yeah research goes a long way with Fanfiction.

Um I'm getting help with editing and tips so I'm not sure when i'll post Chapter 5 but on the bright side, it's my birthday next friday. I'll 19! :D It's gone a bit too quick if you ask me XD

(Way too quick).

Have you tried recreating 'Rise of Scar' in your own way?

(Also I realised Kubiri's float has only 3 crocodiles and decided that the crocos seen in that Lake in the Outlands can be part of it too)