Thread:TheNewGuy01/@comment-7808472-20130909210425/@comment-7808472-20130913141323

Oh, I meant to put why did you say. Just noticed it the grammar mistake.

Anyways, I need you to give me your opinion on 2 upcoming fanfictions I am planning to write:

1) Short story: Adolecent Nala after hunting dreams with Simba, and her little known of what happened to him, thinking how happy she'd be with him now and how much she misses him.

2) Chapter story: Two lionesses who are sisters in Malka's Pride (in his fathers reign; yes I think Malka is the prince of his pride) who want to do what is right for their dead brother, whom did right for the pride but Malka's father has set a new law that all corpses should be set out for other animals to eat, and not to have a general burrial anymore. The two lioness' decide to burry him in secret, while it means death to them if the king finds out. Once the king finds out, he decides to sentence to death both the lioness' while Malka on the other hand does not want his father to do so, though he deeply respects his decisions. Malka claims (oh, one of the lioness', the one that takes the lead in this, is betroved to Malka) that it is the first time that females try to do whats right, and the rest of the pride respect it, and if anything happens to them, they'd start to hate the king. His father doesn't care one bit (pfft, heartless), but Malka resolves to run away to Pride Rock to search for help in this situation since in 4 more days the king will kill the lioness', finding out that Simba is dead (you know the story, he wasn't), but moves on, and decided to.. You'll find out. XD