Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-35360394-20181128163933/@comment-35360394-20181129172519

I'd need a link to see the whole story. But with insight of what's going on while I read this story if in a book would be one of the better influences of how to trust yourself and keep your perseverance as strong as possible. Your Elena character is even braver than the orginal Pride Lands Lions, She's as as brave as an alpha. The events you mention in this conversation remind me a bit of the what Balto's daughter goes through in his animated sequel while she has to learn how her wild cousins are differnt but that she's still has enough quiality to join their pack. What your character of Elena faced was just more active than what Alue experienced.

You did excellent on writing scenes her courage and skills of being considerate better than people usually write such scenes for any animated character's adventure.