Talk:Jasiri's Vacations To Ethiopia Series/@comment-38407585-20190704165005

I like the idea about Jasiri going on a journey to travel with her clan. And it's great that you included many different characters.

It's a little sad, that there no finished chapters yet, but always a good idea to write down the first things that come to your mind. Like that you can think about what characters are going to say and do.