Thread:Theultimatelifeform/@comment-3562042-20170930224416/@comment-3562042-20171112010730

Ginnyharry4ever wrote: Ginnyharry4ever wrote: What do you think of this

"The Outlanders will always attack your family. We want to rule the Pridelands." Janja said.

Kion shivered, and began flexing his claws.

Behind him, Fuli and Nala exchanged a glance.

"Don't threaten my family." Kion snapped.

Janja cackled.

"There's nothing you can do about it." He said.

"You're wrong Janja." Kion growled.

He braced himself, and performed the Roar.d

It sent Janja's Clan toppling backwards.

Kion sank down, and began to sob.

Instantly, Nala moved forward, and curled a paw around Kion's shoulders.

"Shh. It's okay." She said soothingly.

"It's not okay, Mom." Kion said tearfully.

This isn't finalized

Is this good?