Talk:The Lion Guard: Rafiki's Promise/@comment-27625725-20161009184336

I enjoyed this story.

Praise:


 * Rafiki was very in-character!


 * The affection between Sarabi and Nita was sweet. So was the affection between Nita and Simba!


 * The song was very appropriate for the situation.


 * I liked the way so many characters were included in the story!

Criticism:


 * Simba and Mufasa's quotes being pretty much exactly what they said about Kion was a little odd. I recommend writing completely original dialogue.


 * The part with Kata was a little unclear. Why did her words inspire tension?