Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20190524190809/@comment-33029135-20190605163036

First, the plot would be best if you did not do episodes according to the pattern that in one lion the guard rescues someone and in the other our gepardzica visits a little lion cub and in the third son Simba meets her friend hyena in my opinion episodes should have a different plot each next should have a story different from from the previous episode so as to interest the reader with new content, secondly, more often introduce new characters and especially antagonists, and it would be best if both new antagonists and old ones explain their motivation why they fight the main characters, third episodes, for example Christmas episode, such special ones curiosity of the reader. Fourthly, dialogues must reflect the emotions that accompany characters in history and at the same time describe what is happening