Talk:The Lion Guard: Simba's Decision/@comment-27625725-20160818225218

Not bad, Ginny! :) I liked this story!

Praise:


 * The family drama with Kora's family adds a bit of strain to the peaceful family, which is a good thing for a story!


 * Nita mentioned that Kion is especially fond of Mari, which fits the story, as Kion frequently talks about her.


 * It's nice to see that in your stories, Simba puts his family above his duties when he feels that he needs to bond with a certain relative. I enjoyed the part with Simba and Mari.


 * I like to see characters interacting with their grandparents, as this does not really happen in the TLK films. For this reason, I'm fond of the exchange between Kiara and Sarafina.

Criticism:


 * Sometimes it gets a little redundant when every story features talk about Marigold. What about the rest of the family; how are they doing? What about the Lion Guard? The Pride Landers?


 * I'd like to see Nita doing more without Rafiki sometimes. Though their bond is sweet, I want to learn more about how Nita interacts with her family.