Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20190302201957/@comment-33029135-20190415192240

Okay, it's nice that you want your story to have a message only that the problem is that you use this scheme in almost every story, something like this can simply bored people, it would be best if her story had a few different threads, for example, it perfectly shows the original series Lion guard or series How to train a dragon or Tangled: Series Because these series show how to interest the viewer each episode is different from the previous one and the plot also differs and most importantly in this case are threads appearing in the background that seem seemingly irrelevant at first so that in the finale of history they prove to be relevant to the story told in the series