Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20190302201957/@comment-33029135-20190415194427

Ginnyharry4ever wrote: Ginnyharry4ever wrote: Tell me more criticism you have. the next problem is that everyone tells each other "I love you" which should rather be typical for families and couples in love Another problem is that although the characters have interesting and really well-written personalities, they do not have the opportunity to present this to readers due to the repetitiveness of the episode's plot. a good solution would be to show teamwork between several different characters and I'm not just talking about teams like for example Lion's Guard and also about characters from outside and I think that it would be a good idea to enter into a series of duels or even a battle with some more antagonism and to this role Scar is perfect