Thread:Kanapkuba/@comment-3562042-20190605171341/@comment-3562042-20190610212744

Ginnyharry4ever wrote: Ginnyharry4ever wrote: Here’s an example of what I mean: This is a comment from A Sibling for Nita, the fanfic that focuses on Marigold’s birth. Praise:

This story was more descriptive than most, good work!

All the affection in the story was sweet.

I really liked Nita's reaction to meeting Marigold.

The bonding between Fuli and Belee was cute!

Criticism:

Kora was being kind of useless while his relatives insulted his exhausted mate.

I accepted that criticism because it was kinda true.